From 93425776da43aadded8c5a575e5c39607bc78492 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Hilary Caws-Elwitt <hce@epix.net>
Date: Mon, 9 May 2011 07:48:24 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 1/1] rewrote MARC correctness para for clarity & to test git
 directions

---
 2.0/stafftasks/cataloging.xml | 5 ++---
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/2.0/stafftasks/cataloging.xml b/2.0/stafftasks/cataloging.xml
index 5212ad2bb0..071fe127e3 100644
--- a/2.0/stafftasks/cataloging.xml
+++ b/2.0/stafftasks/cataloging.xml
@@ -27,9 +27,8 @@ xml:id="cataloging">
     <para>OPAC icons for text, moving pictures and sound rely on
     correct MARC coding in the leader and the 008, as do OPAC
     search filters such as publication date, item type, or target
-    audience. Bibliographic matching and de-duplicating also rely
-    on correct MARC coding and consistency in use and content in
-    particular MARC tags.</para>
+    audience. Bibliographic matching and de-duplicating also need
+    correct and consistent MARC coding in particular tags.</para>
 
     <simplesect xml:id="editingMARCrecords">
       <title>Editing MARC Records</title>
-- 
2.43.2